Hey Bob, com'er, you got to see this. Just a minute Jeff I need to finish this work-order. No,
seriously you gotta see this man. What is it Jeff? I'm kinda busy here. Dude, that hot red-head
you were helping a few minutes ago dropped her cell phone, and well, I thought I would check to
see if I could find her number to let her know, and I was just kinda look'n through her video files
and there are these shots of her and some guy, and dude, they are totally do'n it. Don't mess
with me Jeff, I have work to do. Check it out! Am I lying? Wow, no you're not, now that
chick is my kind'a freak. You'd better give that to me Jeff, your not old enough to be look'n at
stuff like that. No way Bob, finders keepers man. Fine, genius, but if the boss finds out you've
been scoping out a customer's personal info, you're history; he is one straight arrow.
Daaamm, your right man, he'd totally blow a gasket. So, what are you gonna do now junior,
find the chick and give it back to her, keep it to show your buds at school, try to sell the video to
one of those on-line porn sites? Slow down Bob, I need to think. You'd better figure it out before
she comes back look'n to see if she left it here and finds you slobbering over it. Oh shit, your
right. I can't give it back to her now! One look at her and stupid grin on my face is gonna give me
away, she's gonna know I was check'n it out. Yeah, that's one drawback of being seventeen, your
face is pretty much an open book, and watch you language here on the floor man, customers,
remember. Sorry, oh man, this realy sucks Bob, if she figures out I've been check'n out her
stuff and complains to the boss, I'm screwed; he's gonna cann me for sure. What do I do? I need
this job! True story pup, I'll tell you what your going to do, give the phone to me and I'll take
care of it for you. What are you gonna do with it? Jeff, you're a good kid, but you really can't
keep a secret, it's probably best if you don't know. Lets just say I'll find a way to get it back to
her and keep your name out of it. So, what do you say, are you going to lose your job or let me
bail you out? Your right as usual dude, thanks, here, take it. Por nada son, that's what friends
are for, but you owe me one.
Hello, hey Babe...Slow down, relax! I've got it, you dropped it here in the store...No, that kid Jeff
found it...Yah, but he saw the video...Oh yah, he got an eyefull...No, it wasn't too hard to talk him
out of it, candy from a baby...No, he doesn't have a clue I was the camera man. I don't think it
even dawned on him someone had to be holding the phone...No, no worries...Oh, I'm sure he'll be
tell'n his friends about it, but I convinced him if the boss finds out he snooped, he'll lose his
job; besides he doesn't know who you are...No, he didn't put us together, he thought you were
in here buying something... okay, see ya tonight, and we can post this clip on our web sight, and
Babe, try to be more careful with the phone; we don't make any money if these videos end up on
Youtube.
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I think the plot and the working out of the problem you handle well, but the story could use more characterization, more finesse with the dialog, more layers, don't you think?
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